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Be My Valentine...

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A pic I drew for andrew since its valentine's-day tommorrow (12:58) took a while but it's done. I love you so much andrew. I hope we can be together forever ^^ ~<3

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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

More woofs on DA. Great, okay, lets see... I'll start from top to bottom. The right ear is bigger than the other. The head is too big and is lumpy on the left side [Unless that's a little emo flip on the right side. In that case, the eyes SHOULD NOT be able to be seen. Damn Hair-Eye dogs.]. The shoulders should be wider, and I should be able to see the torso. The front legs are too close together and the paws are just a tad too big. the back legs should be less curved. The tail wouldn't be sticking up like that unless it was really short, which I doubt it is. The overall coloring is used WAY too much, the same for the design.

The background is just a little too pink and I can barely see the clouds. I do find it kind of cute, it just need some contrast.

Also, draw actual wolves at one point for anatomy practices.